INACTIVE [APPROVED 2nd Gen] Thren

[ohmyole]

Character Name/s: Thren

Character Family Name: None/abounded/Orphan

Outer Tower Floor of Origin(2F - 134F): 9F

Description of your Town/City/Village/etc: living in a poor city with bad living standards, survival of the fittest.

Gender: Male

Race: Daywalker- just like normal humans, except they don't have resistance against ligth/sunlight. excepts for a few rares that tolerates the sun called "daywalkers"

Apparent Age(Real age:Optional):16

Hair Color(If any): Red

Eyes Color: Left eye: red. right eye:blue

Skin Color: White

Unique Distinction/Birth Mark: different eye colors

Height:169 cm

Weight (optional):65 kg

General Appearance: short and weak looking

Reason/Motivation to Climb the Tower: wanted to go on an adventure and get away from the orphanage.

Virtues and Values: cunning, talented, lucky, quick learner

Vices and Bad habits: carefree, lazy, mysterious, cold-blooded

Desired Position/s: wave controller, Scout, Fisherman

Weapon/Ability (optional. Could learn/get one later): 6F Needle

extremly fast but lack of physical strength, shinsoo has to make up for his lack of strength.

Favorite quote (optional): lazy people finds the easiest ways to reach their goal

Comments (optional):

[Ouro]

Oct 4, 2014 23:09:06 GMT ohmyole said:

Race: Daywalker- just like normal humans, except they don't have resistance against ligth/sunlight. excepts for a few rares that tolerates the sun called "daywalkers"

Almost everything seems pretty good. I just need you to clarify what is your race. You say it's called Day-walker, but then you say that 'Day-walkers' are a minority of your race. Also, if your race's main characteristic is that they can't stand sunlight(By the way, you must have some resistance to light, otherwise you couldn't see. Is your character blind? That would be ok, but explain a little bit more please if that's the case), then what is the difference between a Day-walker who can stand light from a normal human? How does he know he's  from a different race, if he doesn't even know his parents. Please, do the appropriate changes. I recommend you give a name to the race, and forget about being an exception. You can wear a robe, and hide from sunlight all the time.

[ohmyole]

okey, daywalker is a race evolved/mutated from nigthwalkers, unlike the nigthwalkers that are blind and can't handle the ligth, the daywalkers can see and tolerate ligth. daywalkers is a disgrace to the nigthwalker race so they get abounded. does this clarify the race?

[Ouro]

How do you differentiate them from normal human race?

[Ouro]

Hi! the second generation of regulars are waiting for you!

[ohmyole]

Hey, sorry for the wait. I will go with the robe. He has little resistance against sunlight, so he has to wear a hood and robe, it will also help making him more mysterious. And since he is no stranger to dark enviroments, he has better eyesight in the dark. Is this good enough?

[Ouro]

Of course! Does he have a Spear or any other item with him? Just so I can grade it, and approve the CS. We are waiiting for 2 more players to show up for your group (2nd generation) to begin.

P.S. Is your race going to be named "Daywalker"?

[ohmyole]

yeah, the race is daywalker.
for a item: needle
and can I change spear bearer with scout and/or fisherman, since he has little physical strength. so i think that it suits him better.
btw, i've never played rp before, but i will do my best

[Ouro]

Approved

Your Needle have been graded 6F using MathGoodies.

Please read the Role-Playing rules. 2 more players and we can begin