Torik Baal

[torik]

Character Name/s:
Torik 


Character Family Name:
Baal


Outer Tower Floor of Origin:
98


Description of your Town/City/Village/etc:
He hails from a villiage in the deepest part of the outer 125th floors forest. Surrounded by giant trees and cliffs little people ever see or ever hear of the Aos si', So much so the reclusive village and people tending to fall into myth and folk lore.


Gender:
Male


Race:
aos si' (human/fairy body type) 


Apparent Age:
20 Real age:150


Hair Color:
light Blond


Eyes Color:
a constant off tempo change of  colors 


Skin Color:
pale white 


Unique Distinction/Birth Mark:
a set of dragon fly like wings and prismatic color changing eyes 


Height:
4"5' 


Weight (optional):
60 pounds


General Appearance: A all be it shorter male, Torik has a very slim body build making him look very feminine and frail. being Short and enjoying his long hair even if it gets in the way he tends to tie his hair into a pony tail to keep it from flinging into his face. Being from one of the smallest races he often wears light clothing such as button up's shirts along with dress pants, track suits, and comfortable hoodies. 


Reason/Motivation to Climb the Tower:
to end his insufferable bordum 


Virtues and Values:
trusts his instincts and friendly 


Vices and Bad habits:
thrill seeker, always seam, impulsive 

Desired Position/s:
wave controller, light bearer 


Weapon/Ability: 

• well versed in hand to hand fighting 
• High shinsoo  resistance 
• adaptability 
• Flight 
  
  

Favorite quote:
"bored now"


Comments:
just a avid ToG fan here and ready to rock! *wicked guitar solo* 

[torik]

poke

[Bastien]

Ah sorry i couldn't get to this any sooner,
Anyways I've read the CS sheet and it looks okay for the most part but i need to confirm some things,
You've put your outer floor of origin as 98 but the Description states Torik hails from the 125th floor, so i'd say change it asap.

I have to ask you to remove your hand fighting trait and the high shinsoo trait, this is because you're character looks quite frail and as you've said you'd prefer either wave controller or a light bearer, i can't have your character be well versed in both melee and ranged combat. High shinsoo resistance is awfully rare and i cant accept it for any regular starting off(I can't accept it under the basis of it being a trait from your race) and i guess it's fair since Torik can fly, though we have to seriously limit this to short distances/height/duration.

I don't see how adaptability is a weapon or skill, so can you explain it a bit more?
Furthermore you can have one starting item so state it in your CS i'll randomly rank it.

Once you're done i'll give it a look again.
Cheers.